I have only made one draft of my double page spread, as I haven't changed a lot from my original copy. I have made the sub heading lower, as before the spacing was too crowded I have also stretched across the page.
I have made the intro font smaller as previously it was too large, I have also added another question to fill the space that was at the bottom of the page. Also, I have added a date of when to buy Ellie Rose's album and a method to contact her via twitter, linking the artist to her fans. I have also added pages numbers and access to the Alternative website.
The main change I have made to my double page spread is changing my image, I think this image works better than the one I used previously as it takes up a majority of the frame whereas, there was too much grey space before.
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